A cell phone in my life

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    Nowadays, people rely on cell phones deep and deep because of convenience. This is a trend that cell phones play an important role in daily life for everyone, and I am no exception. A cell phone makes my life brilliant and it has become a best partner of mine. A cellphone connects to my life deeply. I divided those reasons into three main ideas to show how a cell phone affects my life. They are multitasking, amusement, and social relationship.

    First, a cellphone helps me do multitasking. I am a freshman, so I have a lot of homework to do, such as reports or English journals. I need a secretary helps me remember all the important things. A cell phone can do this for me and it can help me take notes, make phone calls, and write diaries. A cell phone is a perfect secretary for me to do me a favor. The second main idea is amusement. I like to read novels and Japanese comic books in my leisure time and it has become a habit for me to read them by my cell phone. When I have a leisure time, I can read novels and comic books by my cell phone no matter where I am. It is really the most important thing in my life. My cell phone is a soul support absolutely. Last but not least, a cellphone connects to my social relationship. No one can live without other people, so it is significant to make friends with others. A cell phone helps me contact with other people easier. I do not need to meet a friend face to face, but I still can talk to the guy. I can call my friends or chat with them through the social websites by a cell phone. That is a convenient way to keep my social relationship.

    These main ideas show how a cell phone influences my life. It helps me do countless things. It is no denying that a cell phone plays an irreplaceable role in my life. My life connects to a cell phone deeply. I cannot image how boring and terrible my life will be if my life without a cell phone. It is a part of my life. (374)

Revised: Money is Everything

Writing topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Money is everything? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

       Nowadays almost no people can live without money. Although we cannot use money to do everything, we almost cannot do everything without money. So, does money is everything? Of course money is very important because it supports our daily lives, and it is also the foundation of education. The most important thing is that it connects with our lives. They are the three main ideas that support that money is everything.

    First, money supports our daily lives. All the food we eat and all the daily necessaries we use need money. Second, it supports our desires. People have unlimited wants and money can help us get our desires. Last, it also supports our interests. Everyone has interests, and most of them need money. For example, collecting model toys, or playing video games. So money supports our demand. The second main idea is education. All the educational equipment and teaching environment need money. The more money we have, the better education we have. Moreover, if we have enough money, we can study abroad. We do not need to worry about money, so we can concentrate our attention on learning. Studying abroad is a good way to broaden our horizons and knowledge. Last but not the least, money can improve our lives. Money is an important part of social intercourse. No matter we join a club or an activity, it needs money. If we have money, we do not need to die for money. We can get much more free time and freedom to do what we really want to do. Thus, we can pursue our dreams. There is no denying that money connects with our life deeply.

    Those three main ideas are the reasons why I think money is everything to us. This is a trend that people rely on money deeper and deeper, and it is difficult to change. I think it is not a bad thing to view money as everything. After all, it depends on how we use money. 

Reflection:

   I learned that personal pronouns should be the same in the writing. It is important to make personal pronouns consistent for reader to read easier. I will not make the same mistake again.

Money is Everything

Week 12  ID:    410309002       Name:  Rapunzel

Writing topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Money is everything? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

    Nowadays almost no one can live without money. Although you cannot use money to do everything, you almost cannot do everything without money. So, does money is everything? Of course money is very important because it supports our daily lives, and it is also the foundation of education. The most important thing is that it connects with our lives. They are the three main ideas that support that money is everything.

    First, money supports our daily lives. All the food we eat and all the daily necessaries we use need money. Second, it supports our desires. People have unlimited wants and money can help us get our desires. Last, it also supports our interests. Everyone has interests, and most of them need money. For example, collecting model toys, or playing video games. So money supports our demand. The second main idea is education. All the educational equipment and teaching environment need money. The more money we have, the better education we have. Moreover, if we have enough money, we can study abroad. We do not need to worry about money, so we can concentrate our attention on learning. Studying abroad is a good way to broaden our horizons and knowledge. Last but not the least, money can improve our lives. Money is an important part of social intercourse. No matter we join a club or an activity, it needs money. If we have money, we do not need to die for money. We can get much more free time and freedom to do what we really want to do. Thus, we can pursue our dreams. There is no denying that money connects with our life deeply.

    Those three main ideas are the reasons that why I think money is everything to us. This is a trend that people rely on money deeper and deeper, and it is difficult to change. I think it is not a bad thing to view money as everything. After all, it depends on how we use money. 

Choose a big university or a small university

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Writing topics: When choosing a university abroad, some students prefer to attend a small university; others prefer to attend a big university. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Original : 

     Nowadays more and more people want to study abroad because of the globalization. However, it is not easy to choose a best university to attend. There are always two main kinds of universities to choose. One is a small university and the other is a big university. The latter is usually the popular one for foreigners to choose because it has more students and resources than a small university. As for me, I prefer the former.

     There are some reasons for why I prefer to the former and I divided them into three main ideas. The first main idea is learning. In fact, it is the basic foundation we should consider about. Learning is the most important thing when we studying abroad, so it is really significant to choose an university which makes us learn well. A small university can make one’s study more effective. It is because that teamwork usually works easier in a small university than that in a big university. Students in a small university are willing to cooperate with others. It can improve one’s study. The second main idea is life. In a small university, people are friendly because everyone knows each other. And it can build one’s confidence. It also makes one’s life connect with future. The last main idea is relationship. It always makes close feeling in a small university. One is easy to contact with others. A small university improves one’s social life more wonderful. It is easy to make friends with others. That is why I prefer a small university to a big one.     

     In fact, I think that everyone has their suitable choice, so it is up to you. If you study hard, it does not matter what kind of university you choose. Keep learning is the most important thing. Also, it can make one’s life brilliant.