Week 12
ID: 410309002 Name:
Rapunzel
Writing topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Money is everything? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Money is everything? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays almost no one can live
without money. Although you cannot use money to do everything, you almost
cannot do everything without money. So, does money is everything? Of course money is very
important because it supports our daily lives, and it is also the foundation of
education. The most important thing is that it connects with our lives.
They are the three main ideas that support that money is everything.
First,
money supports our daily lives. All the food we eat and all the daily
necessaries we use need money. Second, it supports our desires. People have
unlimited wants and money can help us get our desires. Last, it also supports our
interests. Everyone has interests, and most of them need money. For example,
collecting model toys, or playing video games. So money supports our demand.
The second main idea is education. All the educational equipment and teaching
environment need money. The more money we have, the better education we have.
Moreover, if we have enough money, we can study abroad. We do not need to worry
about money, so we can concentrate our attention on learning. Studying abroad
is a good way to broaden our horizons and knowledge. Last but not the least,
money can improve our lives. Money is an important part of social intercourse.
No matter we join a club or an activity, it needs money. If we have money, we
do not need to die for money. We can get much more free time and freedom to do
what we really want to do. Thus, we can pursue our dreams. There is no denying that money
connects with our life deeply.
Those
three main ideas are the reasons that why I think money is everything to us.
This is a trend that people rely on money deeper and deeper, and it is
difficult to change. I think it is not a bad thing to view money as everything.
After all, it depends on how we use money.

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